Write On Wednesdays Exercise 13 - A Great One Liner...This week you need to come up with one good line to describe a part of your day. It can be 'real life' or fiction. But it must tell us 'who did what'. It has to be an amazing line, like a tiny little paper plane that must travel a big distance (figuratively speaking) with only a few folds ... Every word in that line must earn its place, or be cut as excess baggage. Let's get thinking about each sentence as though every word counts, like working one group of muscles to show how much weight they can carry.
First of all, I would like to thank everybody for their feedback about the last exercise. I'm glad that it came across the way I intended it. I'm not usually a dark person but this was one of my lowest moments....that is why I felt compelled to write about it.
After the emotionally charged atmosphere that was last week. I was hoping to lighten things up a bit this week.
So, here I go with my one-liner....I hope I've got this right!
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'She danced along the edge of his memory, teasing, promising, but always slightly out of reach.'
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