tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4275513154255629748.post6805175597308069093..comments2023-06-13T21:41:58.442+10:00Comments on Musings of Another Mother: Write On Wednesdays - Scar TissueLenehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01967670281829933493noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4275513154255629748.post-66717777446361164762011-10-02T21:41:52.432+10:002011-10-02T21:41:52.432+10:00I hope she's just forgotten her ipod! Maybe y...I hope she's just forgotten her ipod! Maybe you could write a piece about why any woman would return (and they do!) But you definitely caught the sense of despair at the end of a relationship - there's been a lot of that this week.<br /><br />great song too.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4275513154255629748.post-9657167183756668072011-10-02T08:48:52.995+10:002011-10-02T08:48:52.995+10:00Great song!
I want to know why she has come back...Great song! <br />I want to know why she has come back. Maybe she's just forgotten her ipod. It can't possibly be that she's forgiven him, can it?<br />The ending was a bit of a surprise, I felt that the main character was only just approaching that stage of realising the error of his ways, but whether or not he'd make a change or resist it I wasn't sure!<br />The emotions you depicted here I think would be very true if the situation was in real life!Janellehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06459852025135239788noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4275513154255629748.post-64878660392657006192011-10-01T06:28:45.599+10:002011-10-01T06:28:45.599+10:00I love Chili Peppers, and love your interpretation...I love Chili Peppers, and love your interpretation. I wonder why she's back...<br />Katespring days, new growthhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12809670414388039109noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4275513154255629748.post-91451095473615736582011-10-01T03:39:23.533+10:002011-10-01T03:39:23.533+10:00I didn't expect that at the end. I'd love...I didn't expect that at the end. I'd love to know what happens next and, if they do try again, will he have learned his lesson?Sarahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04402703967636964187noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4275513154255629748.post-10076465375608023642011-09-30T02:47:16.880+10:002011-09-30T02:47:16.880+10:00I love how you describe his personality with such ...I love how you describe his personality with such concrete words! The essence of this piece is haunting and you did a great job with keeping me on the edge of my seat. Would love to know what happens when he opens the door....Or IF he opens the door. <br />Fantastic job! :DStephaniehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03733516439846527903noreply@blogger.com