tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4275513154255629748.post582902461557269712..comments2023-06-13T21:41:58.442+10:00Comments on Musings of Another Mother: Write On Wednesdays - The Internal FightLenehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01967670281829933493noreply@blogger.comBlogger15125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4275513154255629748.post-46713823445539349252012-11-18T13:56:17.993+10:002012-11-18T13:56:17.993+10:00Hello, everything is going perfectly here and ofco...Hello, everything is going perfectly here and ofcourse <br />every one is sharing information, that's truly excellent, keep up writing.<br /><i>Also visit my website</i> ... <b><a href="http://www.buyviagraonlinenow.com/" rel="nofollow">Buy Sildenafil 50Mg</a></b>Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4275513154255629748.post-88148779607412556092011-09-06T07:18:04.170+10:002011-09-06T07:18:04.170+10:00Commenting reaaaaallly late! Well done, do you fe...Commenting reaaaaallly late! Well done, do you feel any better for having written it now? The range of emotions was really intense.Janellehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06459852025135239788noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4275513154255629748.post-54515506128164680022011-09-03T02:58:51.766+10:002011-09-03T02:58:51.766+10:00‘Get out’ I whisper, my voice barely audible.
‘Get...‘Get out’ I whisper, my voice barely audible.<br />‘Get Out!’<br /><br />Just the perfect ending to this piece. SOFT yet so POWERFUL. Very well written I hope I can do too.<br /><br />Smiles,<br /><br />AndyAndyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01880911404474923812noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4275513154255629748.post-50258641441863754412011-09-02T21:17:35.167+10:002011-09-02T21:17:35.167+10:00So well written. The sense of shock is palpable, t...So well written. The sense of shock is palpable, the struggle to remain composed, the fury at the end in just two words! Really well written!No onehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05516581267618212776noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4275513154255629748.post-311799010015076572011-09-02T04:22:18.769+10:002011-09-02T04:22:18.769+10:00I could feel my heart pound while reading your pie...I could feel my heart pound while reading your piece. The emotion that you provide is about pain. Very well written.....I would love to know more!!Stephaniehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03733516439846527903noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4275513154255629748.post-41783449890609210742011-09-02T01:44:38.339+10:002011-09-02T01:44:38.339+10:00This is heart wrenching. You did a great job in wr...This is heart wrenching. You did a great job in writing it.K.D.Stormhttp://coffeedrivenandadventurebound.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4275513154255629748.post-13552808012215598152011-09-01T23:46:16.508+10:002011-09-01T23:46:16.508+10:00Gosh Lene. That nearly sounds exactly like how I w...Gosh Lene. That nearly sounds exactly like how I was feeling in my story this week. I hope it's not the same reason as my story. Terrible that you had to endure that pain. I really felt that.<br /><br />Anne xxDomesblissityhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07270409725826410919noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4275513154255629748.post-9964052242035837452011-09-01T20:50:17.444+10:002011-09-01T20:50:17.444+10:00Ooh, very good. All that anger, the clinging to th...Ooh, very good. All that anger, the clinging to the table. And you've left me wanting to know more. Great job.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4275513154255629748.post-80714977593946344852011-09-01T05:08:54.968+10:002011-09-01T05:08:54.968+10:00Agreed.. powerful piece.. I too want to know what ...Agreed.. powerful piece.. I too want to know what caused this range of emotions to happen.Ramblings of an Honest Hearthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12421173190119742184noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4275513154255629748.post-66093059535147084152011-09-01T02:46:55.212+10:002011-09-01T02:46:55.212+10:00Awesome job. I also wanted to know what happened n...Awesome job. I also wanted to know what happened next, or what caused it. Powerful words, wonderfully written.Kerryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07000402109977122989noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4275513154255629748.post-43590312455685009492011-09-01T00:45:52.832+10:002011-09-01T00:45:52.832+10:00Wow, yes very powerful words.
The physicality of i...Wow, yes very powerful words.<br />The physicality of it all.<br />I like that you did not give it all away like the prompt suggested. <br />100% of the truth but not 100% of the story. <br />It is much more powerful not knowing exactly what was said.<br />Thankyou for sharing xKristy Prowsehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01955912299442971932noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4275513154255629748.post-21255782257724200692011-08-31T21:36:45.454+10:002011-08-31T21:36:45.454+10:00Wow - that was powerful. I was fully hooked.Wow - that was powerful. I was fully hooked.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11920864212300040383noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4275513154255629748.post-37143721975260498222011-08-31T19:40:42.062+10:002011-08-31T19:40:42.062+10:00You describe that moment so well Lene. The shock,...You describe that moment so well Lene. The shock, the inability to process what's happening. The complete withdrawal into a safer place.<br /><br />Beautifully written.Sarah Machttp://peopledonteatenoughfudge.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4275513154255629748.post-51035504003291639042011-08-31T19:33:47.440+10:002011-08-31T19:33:47.440+10:00Well written. You conveyed the moment the cracks a...Well written. You conveyed the moment the cracks appear and the dream is shattered so well. All that is safe and familiar is whipped away in seconds. Horrible story but wonderfully told! :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4275513154255629748.post-47221722786315978222011-08-31T14:13:39.922+10:002011-08-31T14:13:39.922+10:00Beautiful Lene, very emotive and powerful. Beautif...Beautiful Lene, very emotive and powerful. Beautifully written, almost poetic. I want to know more, i really want to read the next bit! xx SannahSannahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13802344259857914538noreply@blogger.com