tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4275513154255629748.post4866404904579134243..comments2023-06-13T21:41:58.442+10:00Comments on Musings of Another Mother: Write on Wednesdays - The Hurricane.Lenehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01967670281829933493noreply@blogger.comBlogger10125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4275513154255629748.post-40100654668310473522011-08-20T19:06:36.258+10:002011-08-20T19:06:36.258+10:00This is a lovely lovely piece. I want to know more...This is a lovely lovely piece. I want to know more ...Stella Orbithttp://stellaorbit.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4275513154255629748.post-43783092880775839252011-08-20T10:03:16.585+10:002011-08-20T10:03:16.585+10:00WOW how and where do I start naming off all the th...WOW how and where do I start naming off all the things I love about this piece? You did a marvelous job with the word and wove such an intricate description that everything was put on hold while I savored the words. Can't wait to read more of your work!Laura Mariahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17165700659874093849noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4275513154255629748.post-5804264858587188972011-08-19T23:09:58.220+10:002011-08-19T23:09:58.220+10:00I really liked this, the way you strung the words ...I really liked this, the way you strung the words together echoed the movement of the hurricane.<br /><br />"an effortless air of vivacity" - Wonderful!<br /><br />And I too like the Yin and Yang here. Great work, Lene<br /><br />Gill xInkPaperPenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14595595934607152505noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4275513154255629748.post-77439823064897780392011-08-19T23:06:48.878+10:002011-08-19T23:06:48.878+10:00A good descriptive piece.Nice juxtaposition betwee...A good descriptive piece.Nice juxtaposition between Earth and Sea too. :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4275513154255629748.post-79334109886315910682011-08-19T10:34:27.831+10:002011-08-19T10:34:27.831+10:00I loved the contrast between the two - his steadin...I loved the contrast between the two - his steadiness, her volatility. Lovely use of words to build a picture.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4275513154255629748.post-62963994868619136542011-08-18T19:52:19.081+10:002011-08-18T19:52:19.081+10:00Ooh! Lots and lots of gorgeous words here! The rhy...Ooh! Lots and lots of gorgeous words here! The rhythm of the description matches the motion you're describing her and it works really well to create a mood. The mood is exciting and ominous!No onehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05516581267618212776noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4275513154255629748.post-43978647830369427582011-08-18T14:00:28.413+10:002011-08-18T14:00:28.413+10:00Wow!
You are obviously a lover of words and what a...Wow!<br />You are obviously a lover of words and what a way you have with them.<br />The last lines in this piece had me thinking about a sturdy lighthouse in the midst of a tumultuous sea - great imagery.Felicityhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10327661563449068137noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4275513154255629748.post-41391771744142290262011-08-18T13:29:41.761+10:002011-08-18T13:29:41.761+10:00Love, love, love it! I love that your character is...Love, love, love it! I love that your character is the one to pique someone else's interest. Love the turmoil.<br />Hope life at yours becomes a little less tumultuous and you get more than 5 minutes to yourself next week<br />Sannah xxSannahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13802344259857914538noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4275513154255629748.post-46010175680047769722011-08-18T12:28:51.856+10:002011-08-18T12:28:51.856+10:00Thanks Anne. It's a bit brief this week, I had...Thanks Anne. It's a bit brief this week, I had trouble getting five minutes without an interruption from my children! And yes, quite tumultuous here...just ask my Hubby!Lenehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01967670281829933493noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4275513154255629748.post-36340063919133236622011-08-18T12:12:16.630+10:002011-08-18T12:12:16.630+10:00Love it Lene. Very descriptive. You, a tumultuous ...Love it Lene. Very descriptive. You, a tumultuous female? Never! LOL<br /><br />Anne xxDomesblissityhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07270409725826410919noreply@blogger.com